Sorry, not so great
I under stand this is your first time, but that laked skills and plot. I liked that Bob is Sad flash that will be blamed any secound now better than yours. I've been learning flash, and people have been telling me to teach it to my self as well. This flash is exactly why I use tutorials and additional help from experienced people. Both the quality and the actuall plot prooves you have no patience. So get on those totorials and take some time to think of a better plot, even if it is a short, k buddy.
Saxodormat